Today, we were looking at the story board of our thriller, and we decided that it needed to be longer and that we weren't thinking properly about every move that would occur, so we decided to leave the first but change the second. The original one was where Kate gets out of bed, then you see her walking down the stairs. We changed this to when she gets out bed, it goes to a point of view shot as she walking towards the door, and then as she starts to open the door, and then the view she sees when the door is fully open. Kate then walks out of the point of view shot with the camera staying still, and she starts to walk down the stairs, and the camera sees this through the banisters. The next shot is at the bottom of the stairs when she is walking down. Then, when Kate reaches the bottom of the stairs, the camera is at the back of her and she walks into the kitchen. Th camera then pans around her and ends up as a close up shot. She then walks away and back up the stairs, but in the middle, she stops and looks out the window, which then is a point of view shot. She then turns around and walks down the stairs and out the front door, still in a point of view shot to give it more of a wobbly effect. The scene then cuts, and opens again with a long shot view of the forest with the light from the forest blaring out. You see Kate slowly starting to walk towards the forest, and she gets further away from the camera until it is a long shot and the camera can hardly see her. The camera then appears in the forest as a point of view shot, and Kate is looking around for the light that she saw and calling for her boyfriend. The scene then changes back to the room at the beginning of the thriller, and the hand is gone, left the pencil rolling, and the cigarette that was in the ashtray has gone down to the bottom to show that the man that was there was not anymore. It then goes back into the forest where Kate is walking in front of the camera, then she stops and the camera goes up close behind her. Kate quickly turns around, then the camera circles her a couple of times then stops very closely to her eyes, which open very wide. At this point, the music stops sharply as she opens her eyes, and then there would be a black out  for the ending.