5th March, 11:40pm

Today when we were editing, we showed our thriller to an audience to see what was good and what we could improve. The comments we got, was to shorten the certificate sign and the neptune logo as they went on for too long. Also, when Kate was in the woods, and it changed from her spinning around calling Elliot's name, to her standing still and screaming, there was a transition that was just a black screen that was said to look like time had passed, even thought she was in the same place in the same clothes, and time did not pass, so we changed it so there was no transition.